Thursday, October 2, 2014

10/2 - In Class Lab - Rhetorical Analysis of an "A" Paper

Things that strike us immediately about the “Transportation” Paper:
·         Design
o   Use of images
o   Bold sub-titles
o   Transparent imagery (back ground of main paper)
o   Use of graphs
o   Use of tables

·         Genre
o   Very clear that it was a research paper

·         Sources
o   Clear work cited page
o   Page numbers are not listed in the parenthetical within the text
o   He puts the period before the parenthesis when cited sources.  Period goes after citation.
 
“Transportation Paper” vrs. “Conscription Paper”

 
Conscription
Transportation
Own Work?
2
4
3,000 words?
4
4
Correct grammar….?
2 – Multiple mistakes
4
Correct work cited…?
3 – Incorrectly employed
3 – Due to incorrect citations within paper (use of period incorrect)
Argue thesis well?
3 – Had conflicting economy points
4 – Use of graphs, images, tables helped to argue and illustrate thesis
Logical Case?
3 - Due to bad transitions
4 – Use of graphs, images, tables helped to argue and illustrate thesis
10 Work Cited?
2 – No peer reviewed articles
4
 
 
 

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